Saturday, September 15, 2012

Project One: Observation Notes 1


Page One
The cafeteria area:
Very crowded and busy especially during lunch time.
One half of the room is covered in glass and see through windows.
Patio is covered by a cement covering.
There are white metal railings.
There are various ramps and each level differs in height. The ramps make the patio and the general cafeteria more accessible to the handicapped.
There are tall red umbrellas used for when it rains or when it is too sunny.
The ceiling that covers the patio is held up by circular columns or pillars that are green.
I just saw a guy in a wheelchair drop his cell phone and a guy in a green shirt was nice enough to pick it up for him.
The tables on the patio are made of plastic that resembles marble or some sort of stone surface.
The chairs on the patio are made of metal and have a pattern that goes across the bottom and the part that people lean their backs against.
The color scheme of the patio is very boring and plain.
There is a strip of green dry wall that holds lights on near the entrance of the cafeteria.
Then there the majority of the ceiling is covered in pipes and ceiling lights – the pipes and the ceiling are painted black to make it less obvious and more hidden.
Near the window there is a bar style horizontal table accompanied by an array of bar style chairs. You can see everything that is going on outside when you are eating at these tables.
There is a section of couches and loveseats to the far left of the entrance.
The air conditioning vents are painted black and you can see the pipes that let out the air.
There is a guy in a red shirt with the biggest Mohawk I have ever seen in my entire life.
There is a station that holds all the napkins and utensils for people to use when they are eating their food.
There is a wall of five flat screen TV’s.
There is one leather couch surrounded by green patterned chairs along with circular tables. There is also a wooden table in the middle of the couch area.
The green loveseats are very uncomfortable and scratchy.
There are a lot of people who wear tank tops.
Starbucks: there are wooden tables and chairs.
There is a trio of shelves that hold various brews of coffee and other starbucks products.
There is a red, orange, yellow, and green painting of an elephant with the word “Kenya” at the top.
The back of the starbucks outlet is a wall covered in green, brown, and clear see through tiles.
Page Two
There is a weird circular figure on the ceiling that holds lights and something that looks like an air conditioning vent.
One of the lights looks like a gigantic Christmas light bulb.
There is a section with straw, stirrers, creamer, and sugar and right next to it is an emergency first aid kit.
Near the front of the cash register there is a large glass display of various breads and pastries – donuts, banana bread, muffins, and so on.
Underneath the pastries is an assortment of drinks.
The front of the refrigerator are covered in colorful writing – im assuming its some sort of chalk or marker.
There are two giant coffee grinders full of coffee beans.
QDOBA Mexican grill:
The tables are made of a mixture of both wood and metal and the chairs are made of wood and metal painted black.
The dining area and food line is separated by a metal and glass separator.
There are glass barriers that cover the food line.
There is a drink station that offers various drinks such as coke, orange soda, iced tea, and so on.
QDOBA offers something called a naked burrito.
The air conditioner vents and ducts are painted grey on this side.
Qdoba has a bunch of dirty grills where they cook the food.
On the left side of chick-fil-a there are four sections of booths.
The lines at chick-fil-a are constituted by black metal railings.
The food is stored in small freezers and little food heaters.
Inside the chick-fil-a kitchen there are a bunch of deep fryers. DUH 
This old guy is changing the trash can bags and is making a lot of noise.
It smells like chicken.
From the booth area you can see the chase atm machine.
The ceiling is comprised of boring white foam tiles.
There is a ramp that makes chick-fil-a more accessible to the handicapped.
There is a red trashcan and a green trashcan.
THE FRESH FIX: vegan, vegetarian, fruit, and salad
Open refrigerators that hold a variety of drinks
The other refrigerator holds an assortment of fruits and all kinds of salads and wraps.
I would probably never eat at this place.
There is a guy who has his phone plugged into the wall and he is talking VERY loud – I can hear him through my earphones.
Next to THE FRESH FIX there is an EXTREME PITA.

10 comments:

  1. The observation notes of the Memorial Union cafeteria was very well detailed with a good analysis and an ample amount of information. I loved the word choices used when it came to describing particular items and what they looked like. You gave a very good perspective to your audience on how you interpreted the area to be like, similar to when Mary Austin says in The Mesa Trail, “Mesa trails were meant to be traveled on horseback, at the jiggling coyote trot that only western-bred horses learn successfully.”
    As your observation notes were good in description, there may be some things you would like to consider adding. For example, you mentioned what the chairs looked like but didn’t mention what they felt like. Using your senses will not only give you a better understanding of what the area was like, but you will also gain a better memory. You could ask yourself what the room temperature was in the Memorial Union; was it hot or cold? Last but not least, you made a statement about a man who had the tallest Mohawk. How tall was it? What could you compare it to? IF possible, try to be more descriptive with the height. Overall I think you did a job well done on your observation notes.

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  2. I thought that your observation was very detailed and will be very helpful when it comes to to your final draft. You took a wide variety of things and analyzed them, some stuff i would not have even thought to look at. For example the dirty grills that are located at QDOBA I do not think that I would have noticed them, but next time I am there iI will be sure to look. The fact that you did use the whole area from the sitting area to Papa John's does give you a lot to talk about. However, I was not to sure if you were observing the cafeteria area only or the patio are as well. I feel like you should be more specific what your paper is going to be about either the cafeteria area or the patio. But yet again that is just me and you can do your own thing as it is your paper. The best part that I can think of is the guy with the Mohawk that you saw because it shows the character that this community of ASU has. I feel like your paper will have a lot to work with because of the detailed notes that you took and it should turn out great.

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  3. I thought your observations were very good considering the Memorial Union was my home when I went through rush and I had a lot of down time to observe everything. Your descriptions were very clear and you can tell that you really took time to look around at everything in the area. You used great detail to describe things so a person could clearly tell what you are talking about. I recognized a majority of the things that you wrote about but some of things that you saw, I have never seen, which really shows that everyone’s perspective of a place is different. I thought it was entertaining that you saw that Qdoba has something called a naked burrito, I’ve never tired it but I might have to now. My only negative comment is you have such a large range of things to cover it may be hard to successfully put them in the paper. You may want to downsize the area you are working with to make it a little easier on yourself. Overall, I think with what you have now, you will have a very good basis for your paper and it will be easy to write. Best of luck!

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  4. I thought the observations were very interesting. I liked how he grouped the cafeteria area. He put things well and wrote down everything. I liked how he described the different things in the cafeteria. I liked how he analyzed things and wrote down descriptive things about them. I like how he included colors so people could imagine them. I enjoyed how he counted the number of things like the five flat screen T.V.s. I liked how he found things that I would not find. I would not see things like circular figure of the ceilings that holds lights. He did a good job of finding new interesting things that I would have not thought twice about. I liked how he wrote what things were made of and where the things were placed. I like how he noted the ramp that makes chick-fil-a more accessible to the handicapped. Those things are important but usually looked over. I like how he put opinion on things saying things like the ceiling is comprised of boring white tiles. I thought it was interesting how he got under things and found things that are not seen with the naked eye. He saw the assortment of drinks under the pastries. I enjoyed his notes and think he did a good job of analyzing everything.

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  5. I loved your observations, they were simple to understand. Even though I don't go to the Memorial Union that much I have a good sense of where you must have been sitting to take your notes because you went into so much detail. I liked how you focused a lot more on the different restaurants rather than the people that pass through the MU. You got very detailed with your observations when it comes to looking at the different restaurants. You noticed a lot of things that I wouldn't have even thought to observe such as you observing that one of the lights look like a huge Christmas bulb. You went into a lot of detail to describing the colors and textures of things and noticing the woods and metals of other items in the MU. It should be really easy for you to be able to write this paper when it comes to the length. I would really like to see the final draft and how you took all these observations and put them into a paper. The MU was a great place to observe because even though it can just serve as a cafeteria for ASU students or even an air conditioned building to walk through from one class to another it has a lot of other purposes it can serve the people at ASU.

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  6. I thought it was interesting to compare how he did his observations compared to mine. I tried to group the similar topics together under categories while he wrote purely what he saw and was on his mind at the moment. I believe these notes will entail for a great rough draft and after revision make a great final draft. Choosing the Memorial Union was a great location since there is so much going on. He covered everything he saw in specific detail. From reading his notes, an outsider to Arizona State University would be able to tell what the intentions and looks of his location. I have been to the Memorial Union quite a few times, but I learned many new things from his observations. I would not have known that QDOBA offers a naked burrito. I do not go there quite often but now I am intrigued to go find out what exactly is in the naked burrito. The one down side to the Memorial Union is that it is so large. I choose the hub at Palo Verde East and had a hard time narrowing down my observations to two pages. I could not imagine all the detail that had to have been left out since it was the Memorial Union. Overall I believe that the writer will have plenty of information to choose from.

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  7. Your observation notes are super detailed - way more detailed than mine. That will be extremely helpful when you write your paper. I think it was good to explain what certain things were used for, as well. I also like how you wrote things to appeal to all the senses. You did not only write what you saw, but what you heard and smelled, too. I did not even think of doing that in my observation notes. Good job (: oh and thanks for letting me know that QDOBA offers a naked burrito. I need to go see what that is.

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  8. Reading over your notes and looking at the detail you put into the notes it seems you have a really good guide to put a paper together perfectly. All the detail and putting the exact description of what is taking place at the cafe will make it easier for you to structure a paper and to look through a differnt lense and too see it from a differnt view that someone else might see it from. How you talked about the differnt levels of the ramps and how they help assist to the disabled let me see that you really went over and beyond the detail to view this from a new perspective. Seeing that you mentioned the paintings on the wall and the color of the paintings just really shows great detail and that you have a good understanding of how to write this paper.

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  9. Reading over your notes and looking at the detail you put into the notes it seems you have a really good guide to put a paper together perfectly. All the detail and putting the exact description of what is taking place at the cafe will make it easier for you to structure a paper and to look through a differnt lense and too see it from a differnt view that someone else might see it from. How you talked about the differnt levels of the ramps and how they help assist to the disabled let me see that you really went over and beyond the detail to view this from a new perspective. Seeing that you mentioned the paintings on the wall and the color of the paintings just really shows great detail and that you have a good understanding of how to write this paper.

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  10. I enjoyed reading your observations, they were very detailed about the Memorial Union. This will most definitely help make your paper strong. Also, you did a very good job analyzing the events you observed at the Memorial Union. I liked that you mentioned the color scheme of the patio is boring but maybe you could have talked into more detail about why it is boring. After reading your observations, I became fascinated on how many things are around us in different places. With your strong use of details in your observations, I'm sure your paper will be great.

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